Sweet spectral monkeys in a blender that was in intense, seriously everything was perfect it was dark, it was creepy, I'm probably gonna need a light on when I sleep tonight well done sir.
i liked the fading in and out of the spectral assassin, that was impressive. the shots were well taken and timed, the framing from behind the bush was awesome, and the black and white was a good touch. the actor was hot. ;]
That would have completely freaked me out, so you displayed your emotion very well. Your choice of music, setting, shots and and color worked great together.
I really like how you edited the stalker. That was simply amazing! He was like a phantom! And at the end when you panned up towards the light after the stalker shot that person was a really cool way to end the film. The entire video was awesome! The high contrast and monochrome effect helped drive the point.
Your contrast is very rich. You have beautiful blacks free of noise. This shows great camera control. The story is clear though I think the emotion could be heightened by rearranging the structure as we discussed in class. You used a lot of creativity to tell this story. The moment I did not buy is the fall. You have a very able-bodied subject and there is no reason he wouldn't have gotten up. He only stays down to serve your production needs. It's not authentic to the character and what he is experiencing. Be aware of how you crossed the line for the gunshot. It works here, just know you are doing it.
I really like the black and white. It helps show off the lighting. The editing was really well done.
ReplyDeleteYour shot setup was very strong and the ending was great!
ReplyDeleteThat was amazing! You have great ideas for shots and the editing was incredible! I'm excited to see more of your videos!
ReplyDeleteGreat video, it was just perfect the music and the shots.
ReplyDeleteMan I can't begin on how much I love this video! Out of the ballpark! With every aspect! Way to go! Nuff said!
ReplyDeleteThe video was really well made. The shots were really nice, and the emotion was shown throughout the video. The music added to the effect.
ReplyDeleteSweet spectral monkeys in a blender that was in intense, seriously everything was perfect it was dark, it was creepy, I'm probably gonna need a light on when I sleep tonight well done sir.
ReplyDeleteGreat lighting in the opening scene. Really enjoyed it. Great job.
ReplyDeletei liked the fading in and out of the spectral assassin, that was impressive. the shots were well taken and timed, the framing from behind the bush was awesome, and the black and white was a good touch. the actor was hot. ;]
ReplyDeleteGreat picture and quality. I liked the pan upwards at the end.
ReplyDeleteThat would have completely freaked me out, so you displayed your emotion very well. Your choice of music, setting, shots and and color worked great together.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you edited the stalker. That was simply amazing! He was like a phantom! And at the end when you panned up towards the light after the stalker shot that person was a really cool way to end the film. The entire video was awesome! The high contrast and monochrome effect helped drive the point.
ReplyDeleteYour contrast is very rich. You have beautiful blacks free of noise. This shows great camera control. The story is clear though I think the emotion could be heightened by rearranging the structure as we discussed in class. You used a lot of creativity to tell this story. The moment I did not buy is the fall. You have a very able-bodied subject and there is no reason he wouldn't have gotten up. He only stays down to serve your production needs. It's not authentic to the character and what he is experiencing. Be aware of how you crossed the line for the gunshot. It works here, just know you are doing it.
ReplyDeleteI'm sending this on for broadcast to WNIT's Arts Codec program.
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