Wednesday, November 19, 2014

9 CIGARETTES STEP OUTLINE


                     A NAMELESS KILLER sits in a home  He is writing
                     a suicide letter.  He just went on a killing
                     spree, all of the bodies are in various places
                     in the house

                     He opens his last pack of cigarettes and declares
                     that by the time he finishes the pack, he will
                     be dead.  He lights the first one and chugs on a
                     bottle of whisky.

                     He writes about how unhappy he is.

                     (GLASS SHATTERS--audio) from her room.  He perks
                     up.  She (SCREAMS--audio).  He jumps off of the
                     barstool. (GUNSHOTS--audio) ring from outside.
                     It sounds like a (RIOT--audio) is rising.
                     Emergency (SIRENS--audio) DRONE.  The moans of
                     the undead (ZOMBIES--audio) can be heard faintly
                     under all of the chaos.  The room glows red, and
                     fills with smoke.  A strange, shadowy DARK FIGURE
                     can be seen manifesting in the haze, but
                     disappears quickly (CREEPY ECHO WHISPERS--audio).
                     He finishes his cigarette and lights another.

               *This should be a sequence of quick-cuts involving rapidly
               disorienting but steady CONTROLLED camera movement.  Think
               something similar to Sam Raimi's signature style... EVIL
               DEAD 2: DEAD BY DAWN is a great example.*

                     The bodies of the people he killed COME BACK TO
                     LIFE.  They are the undead.

                     One by one he takes them down.  The only one he
                     doesn't kill again is the VICTIM he was chasing.
                     It is his former lover. He is literally facing
                     his demons.  They taunt him.

                     The DARK FIGURE, a representation of Death (Grim
                     Reaper) confronts him, telling him he must pay
                     for his crimes.

                     His former lover enters the room.  He decides to
                     let her bite him, so that he will turn into a
                     zombie.  He feels regret for what he has done,
                     and will live out the rest of eternity as a
                     walking corpse.

Wednesday, November 12, 2014

Quotes Overheard and Screenplay

QUOTES:


I’ve always wanted to fuck someone in a public fountain.  That’s one of my life goals, a bucket list item.

Babe, can you not be so mad at me?

If you’re having the shittiest day ever, just watch Beyonce’s Super Bowl performance.  I promise you’ll feel better.

Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles is on Netflix.  Good day indeed.


Real musicians, when they play, people stop talking.




SCREENPLAY:

   FADE IN:

               EXT. DOWNTOWN - NIGHT

               An old, beat up car pulls up to park in front of a dive bar.

               INT. CAR - CONTINUOUS

               AUGUST, male, mid 20s, finishes his CIGARETTE before tossing 
               it out the window.

               BEKAH, his girlfriend, stares out the passenger window.

                                     BEKAH
                         Babe, can you not be so mad at me?

               Both of them gaze out of their respective windows.

                                     AUGUST
                         I'm not, I just need to cool down.

                                     BEKAH
                         Today is the worst.

                                     AUGUST
                         If you're having the shittiest day 
                         ever, just watch Beyonce's Super 
                         Bowl performance.  I promise you'll 
                         feel better.

               Bekah scoffs.

                                     AUGUST
                         Hey, check out that fountain!

               ANGLE ON 

               On the other side of the street is a massive public fountain.  
               It is illuminated by a wide spectrum of multicolored, 
               psychedelic lights.

               INT. CAR - CONTINUOUS

               August laughs to himself.

                                     BEKAH
                         What?

                                     AUGUST
                         I've always wanted to fuck someone 
                         in a public fountain.  That's one of 
                         my life goals.  A bucket list item.

               Bekah is not amused.

                                     AUGUST
                         Let's go inside.

               INT. DIVE BAR - MOMENTS LATER

               August and Bekah make their way through the crowd, DRINKS in 
               hand, to a STAGE where a band is finishing their set.

               The crowd is unresponsive, too involved in their own 
               conversations.

                                     AUGUST
                         Looks like tonight's a dud.

                                     BEKAH
                         Real musicians, when they play, people 
                         stop talking.

                                     AUGUST
                         Agreed.

               They finish their drinks and linger for a moment.

                                     AUGUST
                         Want to get out of here and go watch 
                         a movie at home?

                                     BEKAH
                         Sure.

               INT. APARTMENT - LATER

               August and Bekah are snuggling on the couch, flipping through 
               their movie options on the TV.

                                     AUGUST
                         Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles is on 
                         Netflix!  Good day, ideed.

               Bekah rolls her eyes.

                                     AUGUST
                         Or... we could watch something else.

               August hands Bekah the remote.

                                     BEKAH
                         How about we catch that Super Bowl 
                         performance on YouTube?

                                     AUGUST
                         Deal.